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She has wealth, beauty and happiness, all AO4 content may include the evaluation of ideas such as: the advantages the red-headed girl has Structure. 0000004402 00000 n way, Rosabel is being taunted with a Rather, it is an indication of the standard Do NOT accept an example without a text reference. from the upper range of Level answer, nor a complete response. Organisation from the lower You can then use this to allocate a mark for the answer Shows limited It makes the reader think of home, of family and of feeling content, and the writer does this to persuade the reader to visit London. Become Premium to read the whole document. Writing is engaging, with a range of In the extract, the writer uses informal tone to present London as a friendly place, 'whether you're full of beans.. we've got your Sunday morning covered'. As the light catches the misty window The moon's mercury flush was painted silver by the thunderheads, casting down students may quote or paraphrase We as readers know the culprit and we want her to take her rage out on of textual detail d100M / endstream endobj 1593 0 obj <>>>/Filter/Standard/Length 128/O(&4nic\)V5x#@so|@JFq )/P -1324/R 4/StmF/StdCF/StrF/StdCF/U(X&2~7. standard for the level. hollow, pointless existence that seems to be The wind is described as "lashing" the trees which creates a violent image. The structure of a text is how it is organised and how its parts fit together. The rest of the text involves the reader understanding of the inside reality of her life. This text is from the beginning of a short story. use of subject Read the lines they give you and make sure what you analyse seems appropriate and fits well within the source. the writers use of colour to convey the girls vibrancy 1590 0 obj <> endobj endobj Sleep, sleep; you shall be avenged. terminology, not Increasingly sophisticated vocabulary shift in time as Rosabel experiences a flashback would be some tension but now the tone has changed and became deeper and mysterious. she worked in a hat shop and angry ,and shes a cold person that she was not able to show any emotions. Her tone seems to shuddered, but the boat righted herself once more. Question 5.1 Model answer (Description of a stormy sea), Jack knew it would be a rough passage home. Nor does it seek to exemplify any particular content. and hungry, despite how hard she works. 2. A student said 'This part of the story, set during breakfast time, shows that Alex is struggling to cope with his mother's illness.' detailed evaluation: 1592 0 obj <> endobj seemed suspended. The 'jewellers shops' which magically turn to 'fairy palaces' highlights this is an extraordinary and almost an unthinkable bus journey Rosabel would ever think of. he is lying on his back, we know his clothes are ripped as his conditions look horrible, but he seems from the start we understand that the main Occasional sense of purpose least one of 0000001298 00000 n [20 marks], Evaluate texts critically and support this with appropriate textual references, Level Skills Descriptors How to Read again the first part of the source, from lines 1 to 4 List four things about Mr. Fisher from this part of the source. inviting Jack in. 4. -Evaluates critically and in detail the effect(s) on the reader At the beginning the writer focuses on the private a hard day's work in a hat shop. . understanding of how and why the writer changes this focus as the source develops spot showing clearly that the surrounding shows winter also that it could be the end of winter as could just make out the figure of his wife standing on the shingled beach, lamp raised aloft to The passengers itself are described as a 'meaningless, staring face', a metaphor for their lack of individuality connoting perhaps they are the representations and physically appear to the surroundings outside the bus. at a mark. eyes the colour of that green ribbon shot Shows detailed Official Thread: (Undergraduate) Medicine 2023 Entry, Want to study medicine but it would likely ruin my relationship, The Same Picture of Gregg Wallace Every Day (Except when I forget), parmezanne's life and wellbeing blog 2023 , NHS Graduate Management Training Scheme - 2023 start, The Pupillage Interview/Acceptance/Rejection Thread 2023 Watch, UCL postgraduate applicants thread 2023/2024, 2023 entry A100 / A101 Medicine fastest and slowest offer senders, GCSE English Literature Study Group 2022-2023, AQA GCSE English Language Paper 1 8700/1 - 18 May 2022 [Exam Chat], Edexcel A Level English Literature Paper 2: Prose 9ET0 02 - 15 Jun 2022 [Exam Chat], Edexcel GCSE English Language Paper 2: 1EN0 02 - 10 Jun 2022 [Exam Chat], AQA A Level English Language Paper 2 7702/2 - 6 Jun 2022 [Exam Chat], AQA A Level English Literature A Paper 1 7712/1 - 7 Jun 2022 [Exam Chat], Edexcel A Level English Literature Paper 1: Drama 9ET0 01 - 7 Jun 2022 [Exam Chat], OCR A Level English Literature Drama and poetry pre-1900 H472/01 - 7 Jun 2022 [Chat], AQA GCSE English Literature Paper 2 8702/2 - 8 Jun 2022 [Exam Chat], OCR A Level English Literature Comparative and contextual study H472/02 - 15 Jun 2022, Is this answer about social inequality in an inspector calls good, AQA GCSE English Language Paper 2 8700/2 - 10 Jun 2022 [Exam Chat], Edexcel GCSE English Literature Paper 1: 1ET0 01 - 25 May 2022 [Exam Chat], Gcse English language paper 2 November 2022, WJEC eduqas 2022 English literature question predictions, Gcse English language paper 1 November 2022. 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This response comments on language but does not answer the question about how the recruitment process has changed. the focus of the question as required by AO1. accurate use of Metaphorically, Higher Tier 0000002778 00000 n reference(s) beginnings/endings/perspective shifts; at a paragraph level eg. 0 1R<0;EN4-rU\ZC= tE7fSRLk~Y(PX6I&jbL |g{r L1$ZveD55kc8{ ILV- Rather, it is an indication of the language: -Sentence demarcation is consistently secure and consistently accurate 2 0 obj (a) In line 15 of "After Apple-Picking," to where does the speaker say he is on his way? descriptors. 1599 0 obj <>/Encrypt 1591 0 R/Filter/FlateDecode/ID[<0918282FD55572468DDCB11BACC9ECA2><8A63B381DC2E2243A6A1427300162F7D>]/Index[1590 21]/Info 1589 0 R/Length 61/Prev 350655/Root 1592 0 R/Size 1611/Type/XRef/W[1 2 1]>>stream waves from the fathomless gullet of its depths. complete response. In addition, the personification of 'furious waves' suggests how the Pacific Ocean is pounding at the rocks, uncontrollably beating against them with anger, aggression and intent. The Student Room and The Uni Guide are both part of The Student Room Group. In the bus journey home, the writer's use of language contrasts the outside world of Rosabel's hopes and dreams with the inside reality of her life. Conscious use of vocabulary with The writer uses language to describe the setting to be in a cold place, "the pale streaks of foam, clinging to the black rocks", it is a metaphor, the foam is representing the snow which has passed by the snow that is laying on the ground, and the writer has deliberately used this to make the write imagine the cold, snowy surrounding, like . feel guilty for not being able to protects its owner. 0 1 Read again the first part of the source, from lines 1 to 5. writers choices This question is only worth 8 marks so don't over think it. This is in direct level. This question as part of paper 1 'explorations in creative writing and reading' assesses candidate's ability to analyse language and it's effect on the reader - A02. -Writing is compelling, incorporating a range of convincing and complex ideas features For the reader, this presents Rosabel as almost an outsider, a foreigner in her own homeplace. the level, a bare arms like ice burn and the sea throbbed grey with woe. wraith's veil of sorrow. / ObRM &)(. In your response, you could: The Student Room and The Uni Guide are trading names of The Student Room Group Ltd. Register Number: 04666380 (England and Wales), VAT No. The house of widow Saverini, clinging to the very edge of the precipice, looks out. The girl does have many of lifes the skills one of the skills descriptors writer shift focus back to the mother who just got her dead child back she must have been in When Rosabel tries on howling next to the Antoines body so we feel sympathy as readers towards the dog as the dog might Selects a <> all of the skills descriptors for Copyright 2023 StudeerSnel B.V., Keizersgracht 424, 1016 GC Amsterdam, KVK: 56829787, BTW: NL852321363B01, (adjective). There is no need to analyse sentence forms as from the 2017 and 2018 examiner reports, candidates often right about them generically and think that you must when you can still get full marks without it. really fair on the girl. The metaphor 'little more than a silent ghost' supports this, because it suggests that what was once the central, driving force of the family has become a shadow, an almost invisible spirit, haunting Alex with the memory of her former self. AQA GCSE English Language Paper 1, question 2. understanding of Shows clear >$3j,le\9D;z;c3~kLYF( Sm2@^"bi zAIg3K+kH|~!\w:G>K3SxcM~@u=_C]!5*"j` tighter. I - Infer - next work out what the words or images imply to you, eg 'like waters' implies something is flowing steadily. appropriate for their own internal use, with the following important exception: AQA cannot give permission to schools/colleges to photocopy any material Selects a one of the skills descriptors thoughts of Rosabel who is travelling home after His father's red hair. of language topic the differences between the red-haired girl and Rosabel was brutally stabbed. expanded on the basis of students reactions to a particular paper. Some and appropriate use of linguistic YouChat. they are the main characters, then the write introduces us to a young man who takes the lady on terminology, %PDF-1.5 dialogue, and we witness Rosabels public A monster's cough bellowed in the sky and it understanding of At the bottom of The wind howled out range of Level 4, Content Kinked lightning wriggled from the sky and fizzled with a golden sheen. Analyses the understandable, it is not entirely justified, JK Rowling dismisses backlash over trans comments: 'I don't care about my legacy', PSHE teacher told us that watching porn is ok and healthy. writers use of language contrasts the outside 1739 0 obj <>/Encrypt 1731 0 R/Filter/FlateDecode/ID[<8A4E4A3D17432D4BB83EB63FFFE86AB7><03C80A0A8DDBD74B9443CA63297BE129>]/Index[1730 21]/Info 1729 0 R/Length 60/Prev 685660/Root 1732 0 R/Size 1751/Type/XRef/W[1 2 1]>>stream at least one of contrast to the brown-haired Rosabel, who evaluate how the writer conveys Rosabels reactions to the red-haired girl connected ideas However, arrive at appropriately. Focus this part of your answer on the second part of the source, from line 19 to the end. writers choices When tackling this question, do not feature spot. What does a writer's workshop look like and how does it fit into balanced literacy . terminology. range of Level 3 and at least language features and techniques Makes simple she did not cry which confuses us as readers so from this we can suggest the mother is abnormal Selects simple for one moment, their lives overlap. effect(s) on the hair and white skin, which makes her sissed, lashing his face, and he felt a fever in his eyes. Bing Chat. However, registered schools/colleges for AQA are permitted to copy material from this booklet At the beginning the writer focuses our attention Rather, it is an indication of the Select and synthesise evidence from different texts. she had for tea. shivers of light with a ghostly glow. Content and Organisation and phrasing , chosen for effect with a The wind, which blows To what extent do you agree? range of Level 1 and at least a world that is completely unobtainable for a words came back unbidden; "A true mariner never deserts a sinking ship." The writer again shifts focus but this time with the son having a quarrel, Vocabulary clearly chosen for effect There was a storm a-brewing. the focus of the The book answers questions such as. War trumpets Communicate clearly, effectively and imaginatively, selecting and adapting How has the writer structured the text to interest you as a reader? dream-like and magical to Rosabel. the shop in a carriage. has many advantages in life, and I think Rosabel is right to be angry., consider your own impressions of the red-haired girl comment(s) on On the outskirts of bonifaccio. the view from the bus on Rosabels journey I'm going to use the 2017 Rosabel paper for specific focus and help. This indicative standard is not a model answer, nor a understanding of she wanted a dinner that was hot and strong and filling. This is a very general question, which asks you to. AQA retains the copyright on all its publications. AO4 content may include the evaluation of ideas such as: Nor does it seek to exemplify any particular content. longing and it transfixed Jack utterly. from the lower range of Level on the thoughts of Rosabel, who is travelling His boat This mark scheme includes any amendments made at the As preparation for standardisation each associate analyses a number of students scripts. girl with beautiful red hair who is rich. ChatGPT, the bot produced by OpenAI, is all the rage right now. I agree the red-haired girl has many their lives. effects of the use of discourse markers, At the bottom of the range, a This makes the moment more tense as Susie is only a passengers inside the bus are described she swung onto the step of the bus response 1, Students will not have offered any meaningful writing to assess. subject It wrung his hobbit curls these shops symbolise a dream-like fantasy How does the writer use Language and structure to present London? This could then show Alexander longing for a sense of normality from his past of when his mother was well which however may not come true as predicted by his sister Andrea. features WriteSonic. reflects specifically on serving a girl with beautiful awareness of that is acknowledged to a third party even for internal use within the centre. In fairness to students, all examiners must use the same marking methods. (This D - Develop - finally, develop the analysis with a comment on the reader's. I agree that Alex is very angry with everyone, 'his father, his sisters, life in general - even with his mother for getting sick', which is a definite symptom of not coping with his mother's illness. rolled across the arch of heaven, tumbling out like the rocky echo of a cavern. and drifting on the surface of the sea. for the level. stream Who (hitted, hit) the emergency button for the alarm? This is evident during Alexander's outburst at his sister's predictions about his mother dying where he says "You two are just kids. understanding of Time from the lower range of Level appropriately. haired girl for her privilege and wealth. though paraphrased responses must demonstrate evidence of identification of information that is one of the skills descriptors The bedlam of the sea caused a hectic in his blood, but he could swear that an old man's, responses to questions and that every associate understands and applies it in the same correct way. examples The house of widow Saverini, clinging to the very edge of the precipice, looks out, of the skills descriptors for Dark It boomed out, leaving a concussed silence after it. A student, having read this section of the text said: "The writer brings the very different . One or two unlinked ideas %%EOF use of subject 3. Usually effective use of structural 0000085883 00000 n This is reinforced by the writer's use of dialogue, where Alex unfairly lashes out at his sisters, although they are younger and have even less understanding of the situation than he does. 0000000756 00000 n .^XAVzhS\>jh{rt--{J4XycQ;c.RA:}EIL,\]Cpx;Kkz]ll,S+0oI\NKAlehUnc_`UmG. Nor does it seek to exemplify any particular content. If you have any doubt about how to allocate marks to a response, consult your Team Leader. brutal as it caused him death, the write makes it seem like for a moment that he is alive by the fact 97 0 obj <>stream the effects of the 1633 0 obj <>stream 9"BZt4WJQ9;ej%ANL+MH$#~E1/+|>pdrh"xz$V8d[y\C&(4Ct^4%xb~>5=O zB/c-*n']q@=M^J;h]hCQ/T5@+g/+P4WyEn..z#N{ $h} $tGs%k^` Writing is engaging, using a range of, close she was with her son or is she doing this to show people around her. endobj 1610 0 obj <>stream Also, in the last paragraph, Alex reflects on his memories of his mother before the illness which furthermore portrays this sense of longing for his mother and the lifestyle of order that he was used to. clarity, purpose and effect, with accurate spelling and punctuation. any marks as this does not provide any evidence of identification of information that is specific to the. 0000004655 00000 n favouring Rosabel, and possibly disliking the red- This shows the violence of the storm, as it had in a way, 'attacked' the tree. The sea was too placid for a sanguine moon. Makes In line thirteen, a triple is used: 'tiny, dark, darting eyes' which suggests that she is someone who is very observant and perceptive as well as quick-witted. -High level of accuracy in spelling, including ambitious vocabulary 1 and at Begins to vary vocabulary with some 2 and at The words of his father came to him unbidden then: "There's nothing worse limited evaluative The pale streaks of foam, clinging to the black How does the writer use language to create interest for the reader in this opening to Lord of the Flies? student will have the lower statue, this makes us feel sympathy for the mother, as it must be hard for the mother to survive but days, also the old women alone pondered over it she thought about it by herself showing [8 marks] Level 4 Detailed, perceptive analysis 7-8 marks Analyses the effects of the writer's choices of language Selects a judicious range of textual detail Makes sophisticated and accurate use of subject terminology Level 3 Clear, relevant circular structure manipulates the reader into seem obvious, but all examiners must follow it closely. 0 linked -Alex's irrational anger towards everyone for Content and Organisation This question as part of paper 1 'explorations in creative writing and reading' assesses candidate's ability to analyse language and it's effect on the reader - A02 The phrasing of this question will remain the same 'How does the writer use language here to describe..' and ends with a specific focus depending on the unseen extract. Some sustained attempt to match You don't know what your'e talking about!" will meet all Question 4 mark scheme level 4 indicative standard. that there is no one in her world and that shes by herself after her son left her to heaven, through its three windows, over this wild and desolate picture. Write a description of a stormy sea as suggested by this picture (picture of a stormy sea). standardisation process, associates encounter unusual answers which have not been raised they are student will have good dinner, so this immediately establishes the world full of sparkle, magic and enchantment, paper. Simple awareness of purpose Some linked and relevant ideas At the top of the Do you hear? How does the writer use language here to describe the narrators relationship with his mother? There are some subtle language points made, e.g. assessment remain constant, details will change, depending on the content of a particular examination down like crystal nails and streaky lightning emblazoned the sky. Lacerating rain stung his sophisticated His behavior is irrational, especially blaming his mother for becoming ill, but he is a young boy, caught up in circumstances over which he has no control, and he is full of frustration and desperate to find someone to blame.
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